Thread: Who Wants to be R.O.B?

This is a thread for the members of the forum to have a little fun when your bored. ...Rob as we know is a musical genius, especially when it comes to Songwriting...and even though we mite not quite have his ability, there is nothing wrong with trying to come up with something!

So here is the chance for any and everybody to have a little go at songwriting in the style of Rob! ...The subject matter is of your choice, the only criteria is that u try to write in a similar format to Rob...something that vaguely follows the below pattern:

- Intro
- Chorus/Hook
- 2/3 Verses
- Bridge
- Outro

If u cud set the scene or tell us what R. Kelly song influenced u, or what your song mite sound similar too that wud be very helpful as we cant actually hear the song!

I personally have never done this before, but having analysed Rob's writing style over the years...I thought why not try to emulate him!

Just to repeat, this is all about fun and participation...like with all things here, the more people who get involved the better...and u never know, someone mite have a worldwide hit waiting to jump out!

Happy Songwriting Y'all!

Oh, as Ive set up this thread I guess that's its only right for me to start off...My song is called 'Layin In The Cut' and its got a similar vibe to 'Playas Get Lonely' but kinda with a steppers edge/flow...Very groovy, with similar instrumentation as 'Loveland' and 'Love Angel'...

Writing process/influence: I started off thinking of writing a straight club joint similar to '#1 Fan' but I found myself being drawn into writing about something a bit more positive...especially as its a Sunday, I went to Church this morning and Im generally in a positive frame of mind...also I never use profanity on a Sunday, and if I was to write a club joint I think I wud have to go all out on that!

Anyways hope u catch my drift!

Intro
(Spoken)

Its your Boy V.I.P...
R.O.B...
I see u maan!

Chorus/Hook

U best believe ME (me, me, me, me, me)
When u see ME (me, me, me, me, me)
Did U hear ME (me, me, me, me, me)
That Im gon’...
Beat it up,
(So) Tweak it Up,
(U better) Hug A Thug,
(That’s) Layin In The Cut!

Verse 1

I start the nite, being Home A-lone...
Im hella focussed, bout to get my Party On!
The way I do it, don’t leave a thing to chance...
DJ better be tight, cuz Im in the mood to dance!
Got my mind right,
Got my look right,
Got my game tight...
Bout to go into flight!
Im with my Homies,
(We) Doin’ it V.I.P,
(Come) Rock with me...
(All the ) Fellas and the La-dies!

Chorus/Hook

U best believe ME (me, me, me, me, me)
When u see ME (me, me, me, me, me)
Did U hear ME (me, me, me, me, me)
That Im gon’...
Beat it up,
(So) Tweak it Up,
Hug A Thug,
(That’s) Layin In The Cut!

Verse 2

This aint about the liquor or being stuck at the bar...
Let’s me hit you with some Real Talk,
I ain’t no super-star!
Just a simple ol’ Brother,
tryna do my thang...
God, Family, Friends...
Love is all u need to bring!
(But I still...)
Got my mind right,
Got my look right,
Got my game tight...
Bout to go into flight!
Im with my Homies,
(We) Doin’ it V.I.P,
(Come) Rock with me...
(All the) Fellas and the La-dies!


Chorus/Hook

U best believe ME (me, me, me, me, me)
When u see ME (me, me, me, me, me)
Did U hear ME (me, me, me, me, me)
That Im gon’...
Beat it up,
(So) Tweak it Up,
Hug A Thug,
(That’s) Layin In The Cut!

Bridge

We Gonna Rock the night away...
(I said) Til’ the break of day...
Brothers and Sisters say...
“Love is the only way!”...
BREAK IT DOWN, BREAK IT DOWN...
(I said) BREAK IT DOWN, BREAK IT DOWN!
BREAK IT DOWN, BREAK IT DOWN...
(I said) BREAK IT DOWN, BREAK IT DOWN!

Chorus/Hook

U best believe ME (me, me, me, me, me)
When u see ME (me, me, me, me, me)
Did U hear ME (me, me, me, me, me)
That Im gon’...
Beat it up,
(So) Tweak it Up,
Hug A Thug,
(That’s) Layin In The Cut!
U best believe ME (me, me, me, me, me)
When u see ME (me, me, me, me, me)
Did U hear ME (me, me, me, me, me)
That Im gon’...
Beat it up,
(So) Tweak it Up,
Hug A Thug,
(That’s) Layin In The Cut!

Outro
(Spoken)

12-Play dot net...
Playas and Playettes...
I love Y’all!
V.I.P,
R.O.B...
Shoot, look at the time...
I gotta gets my sleep on......

(Fade to end).

Written, Produced and Arranged by V.I.P

To add an extra dimension to this thread, we're going to incorporate the power of the REMIX! ...With this feature, u can either remix your own song...OR another forum member can do a remix for u...OR u cud collaborate on a remix together...

U can personally request a member to do a remix by just posting in this thread or hitting them up on a PM:

e.g. "Name of forum member, I wud love to see u do a remix of this song!"

(This feature will become more useful once we have had a few people lay down their joints! )

Happy Songwriting/Remixing Y'all!

Honey Im Home

The honeymoons over
Now we're back in the Chi
As I watched you walk down that aisle
I thanked the angels in the sky
But now I'm back in the studio
All night and thru the day
I can't wait til I get off
So you can hear me say

Chorus: Honey I'm home
I missed you so much
I just can't wait to feel your touch
Honey I'm home
Fix me a plate
Cuz you know I can't wait to taste
You

V2

Like A Bird

You were my inspiration
Lifted me up when I was down
You made me believe in love
The only one who could make me smile
I use to love to look at you
Cuz you were beautiful
But then I strayed away
How could I be so dumb?

Cuz just Like A Bird
I had to watch you fly away
You felt like my prisoner
But now you're freed from this cage
And now I'm left here alone
Wishing you had stayed
but just like a bird
you flew away....

drawing some inspiration...liking the feedback so far...

Gsteezy on that R.O.B Loveland/Chocolate Factory love flavour...Good lookin' Son!

...Keep' em comin' Y'all!

Very creative thread people!

(Sound of baby girl crying and her father sing-rocking her to sleep..with a piano riff in the back ground ,hush little baby dont you cry...)

Verse 1
Dizl: Babe, she's asleep
Wife: Hmm...

(Goddess like)
(Queen like )
As she lay there in her jammies
Red hot silky Vickie bra and panties
(My wife)
(My life)
Just rocked Baby back to sleep
I'm trying to not to make a peep
But wifey sho' looks good to eat
I wanna hit it in the best way (best way)
I dressed just like it was my birthday (you feel me)

Falsetto:
Ooh your bodys' so juicy
I'm all of a sudden so thirsty
I've thinking about it all day at work
Now its time for me to do some work

Chorus
Girl now,
Quietly
Slide your body over to me
I'm gon take it,
Gently
Wrap our bodies under the sheets
We need to this,
Quickly

Whispering Falsetto:
I fulfilled my end of the deal and made the baby sleep
We gon get up on another room or stay in here and creep
Whatever the case may be, the baby's now sleep
Get up and come to me and let me (interupted by baby crying)

Verse 2
Dizl: What? But she's just slept
Wife: Ok hold on let me get this

(Goddess like)
(Queen like )
Now she's standing naked
Rocking baby left to right, Oh Lord I can't take it
(My wife)
(My life)
I'm thinking myself she better cover up that ass
Or Make baby sleep fast
Can't we give her a some SMA
6 ounces'll make her sleep till day
I may have to call in sick and stay home today

Falsetto:
Ooh your bodys' so juicy
I'm all of a sudden so thirsty
I've thinking about it all day at work
Now its time for me to do some work

Chorus
Girl now,
Quietly
Slide your body over to me
I'm gon take it,
Gently
Wrap our bodies under the sheets
We need to this,
Quickly

Whispering Falsetto:
I fulfilled my end of the deal and made the baby sleep
We gon get up on another room or stay in here and creep
Whatever the case may be, the baby's now sleep
Get up and come to me and let me (interupted by baby crying)

Bridge
Ok now hush (She's finally sleeping)
We gotta rush (She's finally sleeping)
Oh babe, I've missed you so much (She's finally sleeping)
I could go nuts (She's finally sleeping)
With one touch (She's finally sleeping)
We need to go half on another one (She's sleeping)
Lets go half on another one (She's sleeping)
Lets pretend the baby's just singing (She's sleeping)
Damn its 5am, now my alarm's ringing (Alarm ringing)


Chorus
Girl now,
Quietly (Don't make a sound girl)
Slide your body over to me (Come to hubby girl)
I'm gon take it,
Gently (I wont shake the bed)
Wrap our bodies under the sheets (lets not wake the baby)
We need to this, (Or maybe we could make the baby)
Quickly (Or maybe a little longer)

Whispering Falsetto:
I fulfilled my end of the deal and made the baby sleep (We had a deal)
We gon get up on another room or stay in here and creep (You choose)
Whatever the case may be, the baby's now sleep (Come on)
Get up and come to me and let me (interupted by baby crying)

Dizl: Oh man
Wife: Let me get this
Dizl: Nah, I got this don't worry bout it
Dizl: Go back to bed

Piano riff from intro

Dizl (singing): Hush little baby don't you..
Dizl: Something smells nasty I think she needs a diaper change
Dizl: Sweetie, she may need to eat soon

(Fade)

Nothing near my man VIP's joint but I tried... lol!

I'm thinking of working on a remix for Honey I'm Home... Keep watching!

Originally Posted by Dizl

(Sound of baby girl crying and her father sing-rocking her to sleep..with a piano riff in the back ground ,hush little baby dont you cry...)

Verse 1
Dizl: Babe, she's asleep
Wife: Hmm...

(Goddess like)
(Queen like )
As she lay there in her jammies
Red hot silky Vickie bra and panties
(My wife)
(My life)
Just rocked Baby back to sleep
I'm trying to not to make a peep
But wifey sho' looks good to eat
I wanna hit it in the best way (best way)
I dressed just like it was my birthday (you feel me)

Falsetto:
Ooh your bodys' so juicy
I'm all of a sudden so thirsty
I've thinking about it all day at work
Now its time for me to do some work

Chorus
Girl now,
Quietly
Slide your body over to me
I'm gon take it,
Gently
Wrap our bodies under the sheets
We need to this,
Quickly

Whispering Falsetto:
I fulfilled my end of the deal and made the baby sleep
We gon get up on another room or stay in here and creep
Whatever the case may be, the baby's now sleep
Get up and come to me and let me (interupted by baby crying)

Verse 2
Dizl: What? But she's just slept
Wife: Ok hold on let me get this

(Goddess like)
(Queen like )
Now she's standing naked
Rocking baby left to right, Oh Lord I can't take it
(My wife)
(My life)
I'm thinking myself she better cover up that ass
Or Make baby sleep fast
Can't we give her a some SMA
6 ounces'll make her sleep till day
I may have to call in sick and stay home today

Falsetto:
Ooh your bodys' so juicy
I'm all of a sudden so thirsty
I've thinking about it all day at work
Now its time for me to do some work

Chorus
Girl now,
Quietly
Slide your body over to me
I'm gon take it,
Gently
Wrap our bodies under the sheets
We need to this,
Quickly

Whispering Falsetto:
I fulfilled my end of the deal and made the baby sleep
We gon get up on another room or stay in here and creep
Whatever the case may be, the baby's now sleep
Get up and come to me and let me (interupted by baby crying)

Bridge
Ok now hush (She's finally sleeping)
We gotta rush (She's finally sleeping)
Oh babe, I've missed you so much (She's finally sleeping)
I could go nuts (She's finally sleeping)
With one touch (She's finally sleeping)
We need to go half on another one (She's sleeping)
Lets go half on another one (She's sleeping)
Lets pretend the baby's just singing (She's sleeping)
Damn its 5am, now my alarm's ringing (Alarm ringing)


Chorus
Girl now,
Quietly (Don't make a sound girl)
Slide your body over to me (Come to hubby girl)
I'm gon take it,
Gently (I wont shake the bed)
Wrap our bodies under the sheets (lets not wake the baby)
We need to this, (Or maybe we could make the baby)
Quickly (Or maybe a little longer)

Whispering Falsetto:
I fulfilled my end of the deal and made the baby sleep (We had a deal)
We gon get up on another room or stay in here and creep (You choose)
Whatever the case may be, the baby's now sleep (Come on)
Get up and come to me and let me (interupted by baby crying)

Dizl: Oh man
Wife: Let me get this
Dizl: Nah, I got this don't worry bout it
Dizl: Go back to bed

Piano riff from intro

Dizl (singing): Hush little baby don't you..
Dizl: Something smells nasty I think she needs a diaper change
Dizl: Sweetie, she may need to eat soon

(Fade)

Nothing near my man VIP's joint but I tried... lol!

I'm thinking of working on a remix for Honey I'm Home... Keep watching!

Rob??!!

My Man???!!!

Is that you back on that classic RnB??!!

Shoot Brother, on the real...U SMASHED IT!!!

This thread is really growing some wings!!!!

Seriously Dawg...that was MASSIVE!!!!!!!

I gots to get on a REMIX!!!!